Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts

Sunday, January 29, 2017

Week 2 Review: Mr. Rogers' Neighborhood

(Photograph of Mister Rogers in the late 1960s)
Similar to you I remember watching Mr. Rogers' Neighborhood on television when I was younger. I specifically remember it being played during our lunchtime at the church daycare where I would spend some of my afternoons in my youth. Seeing a link in the online announcements this week that connected me to a video including such a part of my childhood was a pleasant flashback, with a modern spin on my memory. Mister Rogers Remixed: Garden of Your Mind was a nice surprise and even a youtube video my roommates enjoyed seeing as it reignited their own memories of the show as well.   

Tech Tip: Canvas Application

I actually began using the Canvas mobile application during the fall semester since a majority of my courses had already made the decision to transition over to the new platform from D2L. I personally really like the application, especially for checking the status of grades or feedback on rough drafts while at work or walking between classes on campus. So far Canvas has been a huge step up from D2L and I wish it had been the main platform for classes during my whole time at OU, not just my senior year.

Feedback Thoughts

(source: flickr)

Getting Feedback Articles 
5 Tips For Taking Feedback Like A Champ 
http://www.forbes.com/sites/meganbruneau/2016/07/15/5-tips-for-receiving-feedback-like-a-champ/#40020ac325f3
Overcoming The Fear Of Feedback 
http://blog.impraise.com/360-feedback/overcoming-the-fear-of-feedback-performance-review
Giving Feedback Articles 
The Difference Between Praise That Promotes Narcissism vs. Healthy Self-Esteem 
 https://ww2.kqed.org/mindshift/2015/03/10/the-difference-between-praise-that-promotes-narcissism-vs-healthy-self-esteem/
7 Key Characteristics Of Better Learning Feedback 
http://www.teachthought.com/pedagogy/7-key-characteristics-of-better-learning-feedback/

Receiving and giving feedback is a difficult thing to do in life, even more so for me personally when working on my own writing. Writing is a strange undertaking most days for me, it is something I have been tasked with doing so many times while working as a public relations major, but it is still an area where I am still not fully confident in the product I am producing on a daily basis. Revisions are a difficult thing to take advice on from others, even more so from individuals who you do not have a personal relationship with outside of the classroom. Reading another person's writing can allow you to develop a connection to the author that can potentially be more than what was possible prior. I have a difficulty taking feedback, however providing it to others is something that I am able to do with relative ease, that is why the two articles that made the most influence on me focus on the getting feedback articles. As the title of my second getting feedback source states, I have a fear of receiving feedback from others, largely due to the issue of fearing my work would be subpar and viewed as less than mediocre. Working to be more accepting of feedback from others and using this information to better my own product is the end goal for the semester, especially since it will be such an important part of the semester. Only time will tell if I am able to us what I have read in these articles for the better over the course of this class, if I am then I will be able to get the most out of this course.      

Wikipedia Trail: From Homer's Iliad to Leonidas I

(statue of Leonidas I of Sparta)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iliad
My foray into Wikipedia this week began by visiting the page for the epic poem I chose as the basis for my story this week, Homer's Iliad. There was little new information presented to me concerning the story itself, rather the material present on the page focused more on the historical significance of the poem and whether or not the events portrayed in the story are factual or exaggerations. 

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Odyssey
The first link to draw my eye was to the story that was a direct follow up to the Iliad, concerning a group of soldiers who participated in the Trojan Wars and there dangerous voyage home that did not exactly end in a positive manner. The story of Odysseus and his men attempting to return home was an opportunity to for me to revisit a story that was one of my favorites during high school english. 

 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sparta
Considering this was one of the major forces I chose to use in my story it seemed almost natural for my wikipedia trail to lead me in this direction. The Spartans were a warrior culture that developed an intense training program to form the fiercest fighting force of the Bronze Age. Our generation has been introduced to the city-state of Sparta due to a fairly successful film from several years ago known as 300, which ultimately lead to my final wikipedia trail stop. 

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Leonidas_I 
My final stop on this week's wikipedia tour landed me on the legendary Spartan king who lead the famous final stand at Thermopylae against the invading Persian army as they attempted to overtake the Greek peninsula. This was the most interesting of my stops this week, presenting me with the most new information, where I had previously only known what was shown to me in the aforementioned movie 300. 

My wikipedia trail this week continued down a constant line the whole way, focusing on Greek culture and mythology. Maybe future trips down the rabbit hole will lead to a broader experience than this first one, but it was still an enjoyable first time.   

Wednesday, January 25, 2017

Week 2 Storytelling: On the Shores of Santorini

(a Greek phalanx preparing for combat during the Bronze Age)
(source: WikiMedia Commons

The ultimate sibling rivalry has been raging for thousands of years between the Greek Gods Hades and his younger brother Zeus. The two were constantly going against one another, challenging the other's claim on ruling Earth's mortals. Hades began devising a plan to overtake the Greek peninsula by backing the most dangerous group of soldiers among all the city-states, Sparta.

The Spartans were from the western region of Greece located on the banks of the Eurotas River in Laconia. The Spartans were renowned for their warrior culture and deadliest army of the Bronze Age. Hades came to Prometheus, the Spartan King, during one of his dreams, explaining to him the glory that would be his if he did as he was commanded and took his forces to conquer Greece.

Just as the God Hades commanded, Prometheus took his Spartan forces , eventually burning Athens to the ground completely. Upon seeing this destruction consuming the Greeks and learning it was due to the actions of his older brother, Zeus took it upon himself to stop this Spartan conquest. Zeus began considering the major nations and their individual heroes.

Zeus turned to his fellow God Apollo, requesting his aid in garnering the support of the Trojans, who were devout followers of Apollo. The Trojans called the city of Troy home, which was located across the Aegean Sea on the banks of Asia Minor. Apollo agreed to help Zeus, hoping to Hades overtaking the other Gods.

Apollo chose to visit Earth directly to speak with the great Trojan warrior Prince Hector, hoping to convince him of the importance of war against the Spartans. At first Hector did not see a reason to enter into the conflict overtaking lands across the Aegean Sea from his homeland of Troy. However, Apollo was able to show him the inevitable future invasion the Spartans would launch against Troy after conquering their own neighbors. Hearing this reasoning Hector agreed to lead his Trojan troops to meet the Spartans on the field of battle. Having secured a major military force to go against the Spartans, Zeus knew there was still something missing from putting his force on equal ground with the Spartans. He needed to secure the services of the world's greatest warrior, Achilles.

Acquiring the services of Achilles and his mercenary army would be no easy task to complete, even for a God. Achilles was a man who would not simply be swayed by duty or even the promises of gold. Rather he preferred the possibility of becoming an immortal himself in the history books as an unstoppable force on the battlefield. Zeus came down from Mount Olympus to seek the services of Achilles, an event that had not occurred since the days of Hercules. This meeting with Zeus startled and shocked Achilles, who never expected to meet him until the day he died. Zeus began to explain the coming war between the men of Sparta and Troy, of the glory that could be had in this conflict. Imagining the possibility of his name going down forever swayed Achilles to Zeus's cause and he agreed to join the conflict.

Prometheus's scouts began reporting the news back to their leader: the nation of Troy beginning the preparation for war and Achilles joining their forces to end the Spartan advance. Hearing this news, he became concerned in the abilities of his own nation to win this conflict on their own, calling upon Hades to give them strength and power to overcome Zeus's forces. Hades surprisingly denied him this request, explaining the glory would only be his if he could finish the conquest alone.

Wishing to avoid useless loss of life by civilians and the scorching of precious land Zeus reached out to his older brother, wishing to have he war waged between their two forces on an island in the South Aegean Sea, Santorini.

The two armies arrived on the island a few months later, understanding that only one of their forces would be leaving the island. The first evening camped on the island the leaders of the two armies came together on neutral ground to discuss the rules of warfare, agreeing that the battle would be fought to the end, with no survivors from the losing force being allowed to leave the island alive. The battle began with an eagle soaring overhead, followed by thousands of arrows being unleashed from both forces as the armies moved forward. The battle waged for hours, with no force noticeably holding the upper hand, while the Gods Hades and Zeus watched together from a mountaintop overlooking the conflict. Thousands of men were battling below, battling one another for what they believed was right. Just after midday was when the Trojan Prince Hector fell in combat to the spear of a Spartan hoplite. Seeing their leader fall in combat encouraged the Trojans to reorganize under the command of Achilles who was still leading the attack. The battle continued for several hours more with only a few hundred soldiers remaining on either side as they both pushed forward.

At this point the two Gods overlooking the battle realized neither would truly be victorious this day and that they had simply both sacrificed thousands of men for no true cause. Hades saw no issue with this occurring, while Zeus on the other hand vowed to prevent such a senseless war from occurring again under his leadership. By the end of the day both Achilles and Prometheus had perished on the field of battle, with only a few dozen remaining alive. There was no true winner this day, only losers, and one God with a new resolution to protect those on Earth more than ever before. Zeus struck his brother down and trapped him in the depths of the Underworld, himself returning to Mount Olympus to overlook humanity and prevent such a conflict from occurring again.




Author's Note
I took several characters and the region depicted in the epic poem by Homer know as the Iliad as the basis for my story. Homer's Iliad describes a story when neither side truly comes away victorious in the end, rather both leave the story having lost more than is won in the end with thousands of lives changed forever due to the conflict described. It is still debated whether or not the city of Troy ever existed, or even if this battle could have possibly occurred during this time period. The story has become a popular epic poem for thousands of years and has been the basis for countless other retellings, sequels, or theories. Other than Hector and Achilles this is a story of my creation, forming a story of useless slaughter to show the futility of man and their willingness to go forth into the unknown, simply following the commands of another who they respect and revere. The story is set on the island of Santorini which is located in the South Aegean Sea. Over two days I read the poem and took notes from the reading to use here in my own writing, whether it transitioned well I am unsure of, only time will tell when I revisit this writing in the weeks to come. 

Week 2 Story Planning: Homer's Illiad

(how I feel having to write papers sometimes)
(source: flickr

Moving forward to the storytelling phase further research needs to be completed on the geography of Eastern Europe, specifically the Greek Islands and Western Persian Empire. Rather than setting my story in a historically known place such as Athens or Sparta, the war will instead take place on a lesser known Greek isle in the region serving as a sorta of neutral ground for the combat to take place. Moving forward I have decided the antagonist for my retelling of a Greek Epic will be the city-state of Sparta, with Achilles leading a mercenary force aligned with the Trojans of Troy lead by Hector. Pairing these two traditional rivals with one another will provide a different take on the potential legacies that could have been left behind had Achilles joined Troy during the war rather than serving the desires of Agamemnon's brother. I have no prior knowledge concerning naval warfare, especially the form that existed during the Bronze Age, so my war story will be focusing on ground warfare between classical hoplite troops of the Greek City-States from the period. As I mentioned in my first and second note taking posts a big issue I felt when going through the reading process was trying to pronounce the names of the Greek chieftains in the epic poem, so I will be using names with more of a Roman origin instead, hoping to aid in the reading rhythm of the story. This being the first story of the semester means I am going in not knowing what to expect exactly, similar to the feeling I am sure the Greeks would have felt sailing to the shores of Troy. I am hoping to tell a story in a classic age of antiquity, while implementing more modern tones of warfare story telling, rather than glorifying one central hero of the conflict my tale will be similar to the HBO show Band of Brothers, focusing on the goals that can be accomplished through the brotherhood formed in combat. Achilles and Hector will be presented as they are in the Illiad, as great warriors of a by-gone age, coming together in my story for glory and their names to go down in history forever. The leader of Sparta will be known as Prometheus, planning to overtake the Greek peninsula with the goal of pleasing the God Hades. Zeus will enlist the legendary soldiers Achilles and Hector to lead forces against the Spartans with the goal of protecting the peninsula and immortalizing their names in history.  

Bibliography: Homer's Illiad (retold by A. J. Church)
http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2014/05/myth-folklore-unit-homers-iliad-retold.html

Tuesday, January 24, 2017

Reading Notes: Homer's Illiad Part B

(painting of a triumphant Achilles with Hector's body in tow)
A climatic battle between two of the greatest warriors in the tale is an aspect I plan to avoid in my story post upcoming. Warfare is not about the deeds of one man necessarily, but rather the accomplishments that can be made when individuals come together as a unit to protect one another and move forward toward the end goal of victory. In points of this story there is intersection by the Greek Gods as the events ongoing on Earth, to make the story appeal to a wider audience I will be avoiding constant religious references or the appearances of Gods every other turn, rather saving their appearances for truly heroic or dramatic moments of the story. Again I find the Greek names difficult to read and pronounce in my head, leading to the rhythm of the storytelling to be thrown off, more non-traditional names could help to alleviate this issue for myself and other readers. As mentioned before on my previous notes, a series of more dramatic battles would be entertaining  and provide a faster pace for the story, rather than years of siege warfare with the occasional skirmish here and there. Hades and Zeus are traditional rivals in Greek lore, why not use them in my story, with each backing one side or the other simply to anger their eternal rival during the conflict. My story will not end with a definite end to the tale, but rather provide a cliff hanger so the reader can decide the end of the tale to be in the way they feel is best. 

Bibliography: Homer's Illiad (retold by A.J. Church),  
http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2014/05/iliad-rousing-of-achilles.html 

Monday, January 23, 2017

Reading Notes: Homer's Illiad Part A

(Achilles statue in Achillion Palace garden, taken by Vince Smith)
(source: flickr

The idea of an entire war being waged over a single individual is nothing new or innovative, so for a change of discourse the war could be fought over the theft a sacred statue or possibly to fulfill a prophecy that was foretold by the elders of a community. Eight years is a rather long time to conduct a siege of a city, which in itself is not overly entertaining to modern readers, so a more climactic single battle or  several skirmishes could create a greater feeling of excitement for what is to come in the following lines. For a war story focusing on the exploits of a singular character, rather mentioning so many other leaders of the events could create a personal connection to the main character that is greater than normal. I plan to write a story in ancient Greece, using easier to pronounce names for the characters rather some that are shown in the Illiad. Achilles is a classic character of Greek lore that accomplished impossible feats on the battlefield, comparable to the deeds done by Hercules in his trials, he provides the perfect background for a new story centered on his exploits. Possibly instead of battling the Trojans, Achilles becomes their ally to take on the Spartan city state as they are attempting to retake the stolen time or fulfill a prophecy. Instead of an assortment of chieftains coming together to serve the bidding of one king, it would instead be one king going against the odds to overcome. 

Biography: Homer's Illiad (retold by A. J. Church), http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2014/05/myth-folklore-unit-homers-iliad-retold.html